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Posted by Feeble Minded
Topic: Secluded
read rules.
verses due friday.
check in by wednesday .
post a verse whether or not u think theyll show.

Posted by rule
Checkin In

Posted by rule
Only A Certian Child Has Obscene Direction
Born With Out A Fathers Help Or Protection
We Never Met I Grew Up With No Man Influence
To Easily Make The Unknowlagable Into Sence
I Was Told He Walked The Stairs To Heavon
..I Prayed For Answers..
No Replies To Questions Nor A Simple Beckon
So Meaningful A Sons Memeries Of His Dad
Tears Fall Cause Of Bliss I Never Got To Have
I Know It Sounds Selfish But I'm Crying Inside
For Theres Only A Picture Of My Blood At My Side
Although My Mom Took Care Of The Depressing Hole
..In My Heart..
Some Feelings Of Emotions Where Out Of Her Control
I Feel As If I Was Beaton By A Unknown Ghost
A Christian Who Hates God For He Stole All Hope
When He Took My Father Breath So Easily Away
Picked A Tombstone That I Never Seen For His Grave
Mom Wouldn't Let Me Visite I Missed Some Factors
I Realised The Past Was Hard To see So It didn't Matter
Desires Burn From Emotional Flames I'd Run But I'm Choking
I See A son In A Fathers Arms Deaths Always Prevoking
Stare At My Only Picture Of My Father For Ambition
..I Was Named After You..
So To Make Your Name legendary Is My Life Mission
..I Turned Sixteen..
Off To Get My License An I Needed My Birth Certificate
Found A Box Of Letters To My Past Knowledgable Benifit
..Smiled In Answers..
Hid Hate For My Moms Betrayel Of My Dads Demies
I Was Secluded Sixteen Years Of Looking In your Eyes

Posted by Lethargic
V - Rule...despite his opponent's amazing verse.

Posted by Emerge
gay ass mind trap... lost

Posted by Feeble Minded
vote / rule.

Posted by DaT pImP 420
Quote:
Originally Posted by rule
Only A Certian Child Has Obscene Direction
Born With Out A Fathers Help Or Protection
We Never Met I Grew Up With No Man Influence
To Easily Make The Unknowlagable Into Sence
I Was Told He Walked The Stairs To Heavon
..I Prayed For Answers..
No Replies To Questions Nor A Simple Beckon
So Meaningful A Sons Memeries Of His Dad
Tears Fall Cause Of Bliss I Never Got To Have
I Know It Sounds Selfish But I'm Crying Inside
For Theres Only A Picture Of My Blood At My Side
Although My Mom Took Care Of The Depressing Hole
..In My Heart..
Some Feelings Of Emotions Where Out Of Her Control
I Feel As If I Was Beaton By A Unknown Ghost
A Christian Who Hates God For He Stole All Hope
When He Took My Father Breath So Easily Away
Picked A Tombstone That I Never Seen For His Grave
Mom Wouldn't Let Me Visite I Missed Some Factors
I Realised The Past Was Hard To see So It didn't Matter
Desires Burn From Emotional Flames I'd Run But I'm Choking
I See A son In A Fathers Arms Deaths Always Prevoking
Stare At My Only Picture Of My Father For Ambition
..I Was Named After You..
So To Make Your Name legendary Is My Life Mission
..I Turned Sixteen..
Off To Get My License An I Needed My Birth Certificate
Found A Box Of Letters To My Past Knowledgable Benifit
..Smiled In Answers..
Hid Hate For My Moms Betrayel Of My Dads Demies
I Was Secluded Sixteen Years Of Looking In your Eyes

I give You mad ups, keep floin

Posted by FuE-xIoN
Wow....Mindtraps Verse Was Pure Dopeness.....It Was So Sick It Was Beyond Our Visible Measures....

Vote - Rule

Posted by Verbal Kent
Vote Chrit... I aint never seen a verse like that ever... that shit was whoa...







you know... kinda like when you post like whoa...

head shots like whoa...


and whatever I say is Whoa... is whoa...


ma ya man aint whoa...


ya kids aint whoa...


ya ass is whoa...




rules verse like ok...




real vote like WHOA...

Posted by B.I.Detained
V/Rule

altho EoE came dope

Posted by Trapt Wit
Damn...

No-showing sucks

I'd post late but ya'll would bitch