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14. MaRVJay1009 Vs. 51. Os1ris


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-- 14. MaRVJay1009 Vs. 51. Os1ris
 
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Posted by FlowIntelligent.
Rules:

Battles go up Wednesday, Check Ins due on Friday before 11:59 PM EST, Verses due on Sunday before 11:59 PM EST.

10 Lines
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding

Only Voting Council May Vote On The Battle.


Good Luck

Posted by MaRVJay
Jea...checkin In

Posted by Os1ris
mic check 1 2 1 2

Posted by MaRVJay
u had enuff time da look in my profile..lol

O's gay "wee wee's cum out his lips" more than man from "france".
even if u put ya "legs on a MONOPOLy board" u wouldn't "stand a CHaNCE".
i neva heard of os1ris im wastin bars y should i even spit towards dat jerk.
u shouldn't of join KORV fam,ya wack ass should get K.ick O.ff R.ap V.erse.
dont like marv then go head pop off bro,i'll be drivin thru ya block all slow.
but as far as a rap career u like a girl who "dont give head",u "not gon blow".
os1ris is mad cuzz he go write in his pad but no1 views when dat kid'll spit.
ask anyone on rv they'll admit,dat he raps like "50 cent" more than a "lil bit".
he came on rv tryin da find a friend,he's not nice ya'll dis guy pretends.
his record is '7-8' da mc's he lost 2 were between da ages '9 thru 10'.

Posted by Os1ris
MarvJay is d/rode and hyped to be hott .. you gonna end up a flop.. if not..
Its no worries cause my style's like a Mohawk haircut.. I'm dominant on top
Like your bio …your rhymes are plain and simple nigga ..you beat me???
No.. because after this youll hear more d/r’s Saab stories than Auto Weekly
You in the U.S.. u confused??..gotta be in Canada for “Queens” to be runnin shit
And jus cause you suck off dalmatians doesn't mean you 'blow' up the spot..bitch
Don’t got a lot of personals about you…but personally I can always smell puss
And im quick to shoot one when I got more 'fire arms' then a 'burning octopus'
Amerikas Nightmare??? You got it all backwards like wearin krisskross apparel
Sorry Marv…you beating me is like hearing jewish people sing Christmas carols

Posted by MaRVJay
damm can 1 person i battle..not use da america nightmare bar

Posted by diman
marv
O's gay "wee wee's cum out his lips" more than man from "france".
even if u put ya "legs on a MONOPOLy board" u wouldn't "stand a CHaNCE".
haha, illest open ive seen all tourney so far.
i neva heard of os1ris im wastin bars y should i even spit towards dat jerk.
u shouldn't of join KORV fam,ya wack ass should get K.ick O.ff R.ap V.erse.
aight, good finish.
dont like marv then go head pop off bro,i'll be drivin thru ya block all slow.
but as far as a rap career u like a girl who "dont give head",u "not gon blow".
uhh wasnt feelin it.
os1ris is mad cuzz he go write in his pad but no1 views when dat kid'll spit.
ask anyone on rv they'll admit,dat he raps like "50 cent" more than a "lil bit".
um good punch, but whats the point?
he came on rv tryin da find a friend,he's not nice ya'll dis guy pretends.
his record is '7-8' da mc's he lost 2 were between da ages '9 thru 10'.
haha, aight poorly worded, but not bad.

*okay, i was awaiting a verse i could
enjoy reading, and ive finally broken into
that level, your shit was a good read, had
as much of a punch element as possible, since
you couldnt really hit em with personals (you dont
know him). but flow was off in a few lines. but
ya had some of the illest lines ive read so far.


Os1ris
MarvJay is d/rode and hyped to be hott .. you gonna end up a flop.. if not..
Its no worries cause my style's like a Mohawk haircut.. I'm dominant on top
wow the multies...umm good, but dont self gloat.
Like your bio …your rhymes are plain and simple nigga ..you beat me???
No.. because after this youll hear more d/r’s Saab stories than Auto Weekly
haha, nice shit...thats all i can say.
You in the U.S.. u confused??..gotta be in Canada for “Queens” to be runnin shit
And jus cause you suck off dalmatians doesn't mean you 'blow' up the spot..bitch
[sarcasm]cursing is awesome.[/sarcasm]
Don’t got a lot of personals about you…but personally I can always smell puss
And im quick to shoot one when I got more 'fire arms' then a 'burning octopus'
uhh, wasnt feelin it
Amerikas Nightmare??? You got it all backwards like wearin krisskross apparel
Sorry Marv…you beating me is like hearing jewish people sing Christmas carols
ive seen this line before = played.

* ya verse was good, most of the bar
finishers were fire, but the flow was not
so hot. ya had good punches, but the
majority of ya bars were closer to decent
than dope/ill. ya gave a good attempt.

vote: marv


verses were fire yall, good luck to both.

-eph

Posted by Oz™
O's gay "wee wee's cum out his lips" more than man from "france".
even if u put ya "legs on a MONOPOLy board" u wouldn't "stand a CHaNCE".
good opener...6/10
i neva heard of os1ris im wastin bars y should i even spit towards dat jerk.
u shouldn't of join KORV fam,ya wack ass should get K.ick O.ff R.ap V.erse.
lol......that was nice.....7/10
dont like marv then go head pop off bro,i'll be drivin thru ya block all slow.
but as far as a rap career u like a girl who "dont give head",u "not gon blow".
not feelin that bar too much............4/10
os1ris is mad cuzz he go write in his pad but no1 views when dat kid'll spit.
ask anyone on rv they'll admit,dat he raps like "50 cent" more than a "lil bit".
nah.......5/10
he came on rv tryin da find a friend,he's not nice ya'll dis guy pretends.
his record is '7-8' da mc's he lost 2 were between da ages '9 thru 10'.
lol......dope closer...8/10

OVERALL-30/50

os1ris-

MarvJay is d/rode and hyped to be hott .. you gonna end up a flop.. if not..
Its no worries cause my style's like a Mohawk haircut.. I'm dominant on top
self-glorification equals a no-no...3/10
Like your bio …your rhymes are plain and simple nigga ..you beat me???
No.. because after this youll hear more d/r’s Saab stories than Auto Weekly
that was hot...nice wordplay...8/10
You in the U.S.. u confused??..gotta be in Canada for “Queens” to be runnin shit
And jus cause you suck off dalmatians doesn't mean you 'blow' up the spot..bitch
decent punch........cussin makes it poor though...5/10
Don’t got a lot of personals about you…but personally I can always smell puss
And im quick to shoot one when I got more 'fire arms' then a 'burning octopus'
decent............6/10
Amerikas Nightmare??? You got it all backwards like wearin krisskross apparel
Sorry Marv…you beating me is like hearing jewish people sing Christmas carols
decent........5/10

OVERALL-27/50

V/MARV

Posted by Adam
Quote:
Originally Posted by MaRVJay1009
u had enuff time da look in my profile..lol

O's gay "wee wee's cum out his lips" more than man from "france".
even if u put ya "legs on a MONOPOLy board" u wouldn't "stand a CHaNCE".
Not bad....6/10
i neva heard of os1ris im wastin bars y should i even spit towards dat jerk.
u shouldn't of join KORV fam,ya wack ass should get K.ick O.ff R.ap V.erse.
Hahaha nice...7/10
dont like marv then go head pop off bro,i'll be drivin thru ya block all slow.
but as far as a rap career u like a girl who "dont give head",u "not gon blow".
Eh.....5/10
os1ris is mad cuzz he go write in his pad but no1 views when dat kid'll spit.
ask anyone on rv they'll admit,dat he raps like "50 cent" more than a "lil bit".
Eh.....4/10
he came on rv tryin da find a friend,he's not nice ya'll dis guy pretends.
his record is '7-8' da mc's he lost 2 were between da ages '9 thru 10'.
Good closer....6/10

Overall: 28/50


Quote:
Originally Posted by Os1ris
MarvJay is d/rode and hyped to be hott .. you gonna end up a flop.. if not..
Its no worries cause my style's like a Mohawk haircut.. I'm dominant on top
Eh...Self Glory....3/10
Like your bio …your rhymes are plain and simple nigga ..you beat me???
No.. because after this youll hear more d/r’s Saab stories than Auto Weekly
Eh...not to bad of a meta...5/10
You in the U.S.. u confused??..gotta be in Canada for “Queens” to be runnin shit
And jus cause you suck off dalmatians doesn't mean you 'blow' up the spot..bitch
The First line was dope....then it got wack, was streched too...5/10
Don’t got a lot of personals about you…but personally I can always smell puss
And im quick to shoot one when I got more 'fire arms' then a 'burning octopus'
Haha, funny shit....6/10
Amerikas Nightmare??? You got it all backwards like wearin krisskross apparel
Sorry Marv…you beating me is like hearing jewish people sing Christmas carols
Good meta....7/10

Overall: 26/50


MaRVJay1009 came with harder punches so...

Vote: MaRVJay1009

Posted by Grave Digger
3-0 = k.o. flow close this

Posted by FlowIntelligent.
Battle Closed

MaRVJay1009 Wins 3-0