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23. LyricalFlowz Vs. 42. KOOL COL-B


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-- 23. LyricalFlowz Vs. 42. KOOL COL-B
 
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Posted by FlowIntelligent.
Rules:

Battles go up Wednesday, Check Ins due on Friday before 11:59 PM EST, Verses due on Sunday before 11:59 PM EST.

10 Lines
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding

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Posted by KOOL COL-B
*rolls in sittin in a wheelchair* durrr durrr check, durrrr, werd

Posted by $wollzilla™
damn, i really liked that.......thas a good verse.

Posted by KOOL COL-B
ayo, at tha end of this tourney, i'll b gittin tha doe
i must not have made it 2 tha toilet, cuz im shittin on flowz*
yo this kid sucks. y do u think hiz shirt haz stains?
cuz he takes mo shots in tha mouth then kurt cobaine**
we both like rats, i git cheese, n he spoke ta pigs
shit i make in paint wont git cancer........
....................................... but it'll smoke ya sigs***
an ass doctors tha only person who could feel ya shit
only way ud b king of rv...........
.................................. iz if u owned a car dealership****
im gonna win this round, so sarry mafucka
cuz ya c, i spit fire like on mario bruthaz*****

explinations:

*flowz=flos=floors. n if u runnin 2 tha bathroom 2 shit n dont make it in time, u shit on tha floors, lol

**kurt cobain commited suicide by shootin himself in tha mouth wif a shotty

***lyricalflowz spends most of hiz time on here makin sigz

****car dealerships sell RV's. rv = motorhomes. n if he owned a rv dealership, hed b all like "c'mon down 2 king of rv's, super savings, and no interest till 2007, back 2 u bob!"

*****on mario bruthaz they spit out fire balls at enemies

werd

Posted by KOOL COL-B
Quote:
Originally Posted by lyricalflowz
nice drop man..


thanx, u 2, werd

Posted by TeamOne
both of yall had some nice drops but im tellin u KOOL, ur gonna get major points taken off because of all ur explanations.......

Posted by KOOL COL-B
Quote:
Originally Posted by FuxJustAWord
both of yall had some nice drops but im tellin u KOOL, ur gonna get major points taken off because of all ur explanations.......


yeah, thas stupid as fuck, i'll loose points fo helpin them understand it better, smh. but wutcha gonna do, werd

Posted by Oz™
Lyricalflowz:

I'ma cripple this bitch, but battlin "handicaps" aint fair
All those past merkings you've had explains why this cat

Quote:
Originally Posted by KOOL COL-B
*rolls in sittin in a wheelchair*
lol...good opener...7/10
Can't seem to make it on ya own, always need some1 to double you
Only way your Eazy "E" is if you replace the "E" with a "W" (EAZY "W"IN)
decent....6/10
Your talent was never spotted so dont go to lost, and found
Compare ya to the Nets since you picked to lose in the first round*
not a good bar...........4/10
Take ya best shots at me like a sniper, but come on queer, PLEASE!
I'll leave ya dome "splitted" like the "Spurs and Nuggets Series"**
that wasnt so good.........3/10
Reading your verses bore me, I'd rather hear NSync Sing
I guess you are the lost member of NWA since youll Never Win Anything
good closer...6/10

OVERALL-26/50

Kool Col-B:

ayo, at tha end of this tourney, i'll b gittin tha doe
i must not have made it 2 tha toilet, cuz im shittin on flowz*
lol...that was hot..8/10
yo this kid sucks. y do u think hiz shirt haz stains?
cuz he takes mo shots in tha mouth then kurt cobaine**
decent......5/10
we both like rats, i git cheese, n he spoke ta pigs
shit i make in paint wont git cancer........
....................................... but it'll smoke ya sigs***
decent personal...6/10
an ass doctors tha only person who could feel ya shit
only way ud b king of rv...........
.................................. iz if u owned a car dealership****
funny bar..even funnier the way u explained it..7/10
im gonna win this round, so sarry mafucka
cuz ya c, i spit fire like on mario bruthaz*****
weak closer.......4/10

OVERALL-30/50

V/KOOL COL-B

Posted by FlowIntelligent.
LyricalFlowz:

I'ma cripple this bitch, but battlin "handicaps" aint fair
All those past merkings you've had explains why this cat
*rolls in sittin in a wheelchair*
^^decent opener nice punch 6/10
Can't seem to make it on ya own, always need some1 to double you
Only way your Eazy "E" is if you replace the "E" with a "W" (EAZY "W"IN)
^^decent 4/10
Your talent was never spotted so dont go to lost, and found
Compare ya to the Nets since you picked to lose in the first round*
^^ehh 3/10
Take ya best shots at me like a sniper, but come on queer, PLEASE!
I'll leave ya dome "splitted" like the "Spurs and Nuggets Series"**
^^good bar 7/10
Reading your verses bore me, I'd rather hear NSync Sing
I guess you are the lost member of NWA since youll Never Win Anything
^^decent closer 5/10

Overall: 25/50 (50%)

KOOL COL-B:

ayo, at tha end of this tourney, i'll b gittin tha doe
i must not have made it 2 tha toilet, cuz im shittin on flowz*
^^decent opener 5/10
yo this kid sucks. y do u think hiz shirt haz stains?
cuz he takes mo shots in tha mouth then kurt cobaine**
^^dope meta nice punch 8/10
we both like rats, i git cheese, n he spoke ta pigs
shit i make in paint wont git cancer........
....................................... but it'll smoke ya sigs***
^^decent 4/10
an ass doctors tha only person who could feel ya shit
only way ud b king of rv...........
.................................. iz if u owned a car dealership****
^^nice bar 7/10
im gonna win this round, so sarry mafucka
cuz ya c, i spit fire like on mario bruthaz*****
^^decent meta ok closer 4/10

Overall: 28/50 (56%)


Vote: KOOL COL-B

Posted by diman
lyrical flowz
I'ma cripple this bitch, but battlin "handicaps" aint fair
All those past merkings you've had explains why this cat
*rolls in sittin in a wheelchair*
wasnt worth a quote. but aight open.
Can't seem to make it on ya own, always need some1 to double you
Only way your Eazy "E" is if you replace the "E" with a "W" (EAZY "W"IN)
i kinda liked it.
Your talent was never spotted so dont go to lost, and found
Compare ya to the Nets since you picked to lose in the first round*
the punch was farfetched, but decent.
Take ya best shots at me like a sniper, but come on queer, PLEASE!
I'll leave ya dome "splitted" like the "Spurs and Nuggets Series"**
no
Reading your verses bore me, I'd rather hear NSync Sing
I guess you are the lost member of NWA since youll Never Win Anything
this, for a closer?

* well, your verse was....good or decent in
the beginning and after the second bar, the
flow and hype started to die. one like after
another, just murdered yaself. but no sweat.
the flow was jumbly, and the punches were
a little off. but pull it together and come better.

Kool col-b

ayo, at tha end of this tourney, i'll b gittin tha doe
i must not have made it 2 tha toilet, cuz im shittin on flowz
umm not bad, but too early for this.
yo this kid sucks. y do u think hiz shirt haz stains?
cuz he takes mo shots in tha mouth then kurt cobaine
...kurt, an alchololic ?
we both like rats, i git cheese, n he spoke ta pigs
shit i make in paint wont git cancer........
....................................... but it'll smoke ya sigs
um, on point please.
an ass doctors tha only person who could feel ya shit
only way ud b king of rv...........
.................................. iz if u owned a car dealership
ha, didnt laugh...but decent.
im gonna win this round, so sarry mafucka
cuz ya c, i spit fire like on mario bruthaz
wooh, some closer.

*this verse was shocking, well kool
i thought you was real good, after
reading this i see your decent, i mean
ive read a verse or two from you, but
this one was not what i expected. but you
did maintain the same decency behind ya
flow for the duration of the entire verse
so votes for you.


vote: KOOL COL-B

verses could have been better, good luck to both.

-eph

Posted by FlowIntelligent.
Battle Closed

KOOL COL-B Wins 3-0