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Flight (8) vs Lil Wayne (3)


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Posted by Lay.
Flight vs Lil Wayne

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Posted by Lil' Wayne
squadalaaa
brapp brapp
im goin 12

Posted by El Taco
sure.

Posted by El Taco
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body
this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley
i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI
cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne
enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp
i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped
Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day
just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay


peace.

Posted by TeamOne
mister taco.

see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes
so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck
he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up
I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same
lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name
Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun
tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun
he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite
his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type
you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right
his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight

Posted by TeamOne
yo im not wayne, he had me post for him cause he's outta town. check the IPs i guess

Posted by El Taco
they don't match, lol, but whatever... as long as fux takes a pound of whiskey.

Posted by LPMNDCTE
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body
nice opener

this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley
i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI
barely descent

cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne
descent wordplay

enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp
i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped
nice

Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
Creative / Clever wordplay here

its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day
just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay
barely descent

verses

see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes
nice opener

so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck
he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up
nice

I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same
lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name
Descent

Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun
tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun
Barely descent

he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite
his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type
good

you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right
his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight
barely descent


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this was an evenly matched battle. The intensity of the disses were just about matched. The creativity in the wordplay that created the impact of the diss was key in this battle. I believe that El Taco won this battle based on this category.

Vote - El Taco, slightly better disses

Posted by Kirk
see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes
^I used an ET punch like 2 weeks ago. This wasn't funny at all or even really even dissing Kesse, to be honest.

so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck
he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up
^No. Hated it.

I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same
lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name
^No.

Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun
tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun
^No.

he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite
his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type
^Nah, man.

you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right
his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight
^This was your best line.




the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body
^Alright.

this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley
i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI
^Naaah.

cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne
^Hahaha.

enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp
i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped
^Nah.

Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
^Liked it.

its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day
just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay
^Eh.

Flight took this really easily. About one of his decent lines would have taken this battle for him. Wayne, you didn't have anything I really liked except your last bar and that was only alright. Should try working on wordplay. Kesse's verse had humor which appeals to me and a very decent punches which easily brought him the win.

V/Kesse

Posted by YouAndWhatArmy
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body
The wording on this punch was shockingly gay.
this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley
i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI
Ok, regardless of the fact that I don't know CALI, this punch read as a statement and it was really basic.
cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne
WOW, can you say played.
enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp
i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped
Again, this is more of a statement. Weak bro.
Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
I get the concept, that was cool. The execution was weak.
its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day
just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay
Yeah, no comment.


VS.


see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes
Lol, the wordplay in this was cool bro.
so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck
he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up
No, this was utter garbage.
I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same
lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name
Concept was nice, execution was poor.
Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun
tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun
This was weak bro.
he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite
his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type
OH HELL NO! Get the fuck outta here with the MJ lines.
you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right
his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight
Ok concept, weak execution again.


What the fuck is up this week? I've seen two decent verses and both were in my battle. Seriously, y'all need to step it up. I am actually finding some of these votes amusing because most of you are giving props to lines that were being dropped back in 2002. This battle was weak, I found that both battlers had at least one or two concepts that could've been executed nice. They failed though with poor wording. Lil Wayne, or the dude who posted up the verse, whatever, he had the only punch in this entire battle worth mentioning and that was his opener. It wasn't great, but the wordplay was cool and it made me giggle.

v/ - Lil Wayne, bring more consistency next time.

Posted by JTR
the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body
nah didnt like this wordplay
this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley
i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI
nah dawg too simple
cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne
lol the john part is played but you flipped it with the nameplay
enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp
i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped
lmao nah way too simple
Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
this was cool
its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day
just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay
wasnt feeling this

vs.

see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes
fucking wack, played, and aint even rhyme at all
so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck
he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up
nah man wasnt good lol
I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same
lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name
you coulda flipped this wordplay so much better homie
Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun
tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun
tacos dont have buns lmao...
he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite
his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type
lol ok but still not good
you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right
his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight
this was already used homie, played

ok ima have to vote for flight cuz lil wayne you didnt rhyme at good man, and ur wording was bad some concepts were ok but u needa work on them, word them better dawg

v/ Flight

Posted by Ghostface.
see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes

vs

Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
ause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne


This was actually pretty close, but I think flight edged it out with more consistancy..an he was a bit more creative.

Posted by Lay.
Flight wins 4 - 1

Flight (11) and Wayne (2)