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Contendors Lay Fear (17) vs Flight (11)


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Posted by Lay.
Lay Fear vs Flight

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Voting:
Must post THREE links of you voting into your check in, or its minus ONE vote for each missing link. If you want to win, then vote or you will most likely lose.

Goodluck.

Posted by Lay.
check son, sixteen.

Posted by El Taco
sounds good.

Posted by Lay.
I dont' feel like keyin somethin up within the next hour, seein as you haven posted either.


Extention, verses due Saturday at Midnight.

Posted by El Taco
yeah, i'll post mine in a bit here, didn't make it home last night.

Posted by El Taco
fuck this pussy, why even bother with it, we all know i'm better
shit i didn't notice who i was battling, i just read the threads first 4 letters
when i compete i'm a surething, but your punchlines are just never on the level
cause you have more hopefuls in a row, than Canada's only shot at some medals
but dont get me wrong, i love my country, but you... i have my doubts in
i dont care if we have an Army or not... since you've already talked enough about him
so the predictions, nothing but jokes... i can spit dope whenever i fucking want
see i know i can do better than Lay Fear... i'll throw in a few dozen stomps
cause i know for a fact you'll go down fag, so i dont mind what these deadbeats say
the whole fucking league can pre-dick you to win, you'll get some from your boyfriend anyways
don't deny you're tight with the champ, and as mod, i no longer wonder chief
see the one reason Kirk's stays on top... because Lay prefers it underneath
lay knows he's bad with the ladies, no moves and they all scream the sex stinks
so when I blow a few quick lines in a couple minutes... i at least keep it to my texting
i stepped over you once man, and twice, well thats no big feat
cause EVERYONE in the league said i can drop hot... so the best to you next week

Posted by Lay.
past your prime..


I disperse the clout, devour this faggot just so its known who hurt him now.
an if he makes me eat my Words.. its cuz I consider him my Verbs an Nouns.
I seen who ya rep in ya sig, an now I'm embarrassed to be in this dispute dude
only thing he proved.. the Establishment doesn have the same depth it USE TO.
Taco's chick proved he had a little dick, so I wish you'd just face it you liar.
I know it scares you.. that ya girl would STILL Terrify eased my way inside her.
save it, an admire..don't try an be Luda cuz you should know this is practice.
Act a fool?'.. you alrleady are stuffed from bein bloated with whackness.
after readin all that played shit, seems ya got me down an bein lazy.
if it isn't Flight in rare form..then its prolly the weak Taco we been seein lately.
I can see your shakin, maybe your intimidated..but kill you? the hook might
so watch him present tense..showin us all Right Now what scared stiff looks like.
just wait till this bitch meets the end of his rope, cuz my rhythmn is sickly.
I usually prep for all my tough matches..so that explains why I didn't this week.
I'm glossin ma belts..you'll get walked over cuz now I'll be tossing some welts
walk a day in my shoes..then h'ed have to figure out how to stomp on himself.


g'luck bro.

Posted by Kirk
fuck this pussy, why even bother with it, we all know i'm better
shit i didn't notice who i was battling, i just read the threads first 4 letters
^This was pretty wack.

when i compete i'm a surething, but your punchlines are just never on the level
cause you have more hopefuls in a row, than Canada's only shot at some medals
^This was pretty wack too.

but dont get me wrong, i love my country, but you... i have my doubts in
i dont care if we have an Army or not... since you've already talked enough about him
^I thought this was alright.

so the predictions, nothing but jokes... i can spit dope whenever i fucking want
see i know i can do better than Lay Fear... i'll throw in a few dozen stomps
^Haha. Kinda funny, but kinda played,

cause i know for a fact you'll go down fag, so i dont mind what these deadbeats say
the whole fucking league can pre-dick you to win, you'll get some from your boyfriend anyways
^Stretched as shit and not that great.

don't deny you're tight with the champ, and as mod, i no longer wonder chief
see the one reason Kirk's stays on top... because Lay prefers it underneath
^Lmao.You fuckin' douche. This was funny though.

lay knows he's bad with the ladies, no moves and they all scream the sex stinks
so when I blow a few quick lines in a couple minutes... i at least keep it to my texting
^Nah, man.

i stepped over you once man, and twice, well thats no big feat
cause EVERYONE in the league said i can drop hot... so the best to you next week
^About as good as his closer.




I disperse the clout, devour this faggot just so its known who hurt him now.
an if he makes me eat my Words.. its cuz I consider him my Verbs an Nouns.
^I thought this was pretty wack.

I seen who ya rep in ya sig, an now I'm embarrassed to be in this dispute dude
only thing he proved.. the Establishment doesn have the same depth it USE TO.
^I thought this was pretty wack.

Taco's chick proved he had a little dick, so I wish you'd just face it you liar.
I know it scares you.. that ya girl would STILL Terrify eased my way inside her.
^This was alright. Kind of forced wordplay.

save it, an admire..don't try an be Luda cuz you should know this is practice.
Act a fool?'.. you alrleady are stuffed from bein bloated with whackness.
^This was pretty wack too.

after readin all that played shit, seems ya got me down an bein lazy.
if it isn't Flight in rare form..then its prolly the weak Taco we been seein lately.
^This was pretty wack too, dude.

I can see your shakin, maybe your intimidated..but kill you? the hook might
so watch him present tense..showin us all Right Now what scared stiff looks like.
^Dude. What the fuck?

just wait till this bitch meets the end of his rope, cuz my rhythmn is sickly.
I usually prep for all my tough matches..so that explains why I didn't this week.
^Again, what the fuck?

I'm glossin ma belts..you'll get walked over cuz now I'll be tossing some welts
walk a day in my shoes..then h'ed have to figure out how to stomp on himself.
^I guess this was alright compared to the rest of it.



I'll critique Flight's verse first. I had you in the end with about 2 lines that I liked. Some of your lines were pretty shitty though. Both of your decent lines made me laugh so that's always a plus. But besides those few lines, it was a pretty bad verse. Once again, it lookedl like you put barely any time into it. Wow at Lay. This verse reminds me of the one you dropped a few weeks ago. I could barely get through it, man. It was just really boring. Most of the wordplay you used was just kind of dumb. You ended up with only 1 line that I really liked. I don't know if you just thought you'd easily take this and dropped shit or what. Both of your lines were about as crappy as each others but with Flight coming with 2 decent lines I'm giving it to him. Maybe it's just me. I thought Lay's verse was not a good read at all, and it was almost a chore to read it. Alot of concepts that could have been used to make a good punch and wasted, or just played concepts without a fresh flip. I don't know, man. I wanna see what everybody else thinks.

V/Flight

Posted by Brydon
fuck this pussy, why even bother with it, we all know i'm better
shit i didn't notice who i was battling, i just read the threads first 4 letters

NOT GOOD.........................

when i compete i'm a surething, but your punchlines are just never on the level
cause you have more hopefuls in a row, than Canada's only shot at some medals

DID'NT LIKE...............

but dont get me wrong, i love my country, but you... i have my doubts in
i dont care if we have an Army or not... since you've already talked enough about him

NOT GREAT...................

so the predictions, nothing but jokes... i can spit dope whenever i fucking want
see i know i can do better than Lay Fear... i'll throw in a few dozen stomps

DID'NT LIKE EITHER..............SORRY JUS NOT FEELIN IT SO FAR.......

cause i know for a fact you'll go down fag, so i dont mind what these deadbeats say
the whole fucking league can pre-dick you to win, you'll get some from your boyfriend anyways
OK JUS COULD'A BEEN WORDED BETTER................

don't deny you're tight with the champ, and as mod, i no longer wonder chief
see the one reason Kirk's stays on top... because Lay prefers it underneath

LOL THAT WAS FUNNY..............

lay knows he's bad with the ladies, no moves and they all scream the sex stinks
so when I blow a few quick lines in a couple minutes... i at least keep it to my texting

NOT TOO BAD...............

i stepped over you once man, and twice, well thats no big feat
cause EVERYONE in the league said i can drop hot... so the best to you next week

NAH..........

VS

I disperse the clout, devour this faggot just so its known who hurt him now.
an if he makes me eat my Words.. its cuz I consider him my Verbs an Nouns.

LIKE BUT MAYBE NOT SURE SEEN THIS BEFORE.................

I seen who ya rep in ya sig, an now I'm embarrassed to be in this dispute dude
only thing he proved.. the Establishment doesn have the same depth it USE TO.

YEAH THIS WAS COO..............

Taco's chick proved he had a little dick, so I wish you'd just face it you liar.
I know it scares you.. that ya girl would STILL Terrify eased my way inside her.

PRETTY LAME TO BE HONEST..............

save it, an admire..don't try an be Luda cuz you should know this is practice.
Act a fool?'.. you alrleady are stuffed from bein bloated with whackness.

NOT GREAT..............

after readin all that played shit, seems ya got me down an bein lazy.
if it isn't Flight in rare form..then its prolly the weak Taco we been seein lately.

OK BUT NOT TOO GOOD................

I can see your shakin, maybe your intimidated..but kill you? the hook might
so watch him present tense..showin us all Right Now what scared stiff looks like.

YEAH OK................

just wait till this bitch meets the end of his rope, cuz my rhythmn is sickly.
I usually prep for all my tough matches..so that explains why I didn't this week.

NOT GOOD.............

I'm glossin ma belts..you'll get walked over cuz now I'll be tossing some welts
walk a day in my shoes..then h'ed have to figure out how to stomp on himself.

NOT A BAD FINISHER.............


OK BOTH SEEMED PRETTY BAD WORK FROM WHAT I HAVE READ OF YOUR PREVIOUS WORK, SO UNLESS ITS CAUSE IM FUCK TIRED FROM WORK TODAY, I SAY YOU BOTH ALREADY KNEW THIS. EL TACO YOU HAD SOME MAJOR BAD LINES MIXED IN ON YOUR VERSE,DIDNT SEEM TO PUT ALOT OF EFFORT MATBE OR TIME INTO IT.EL TACO YOU ALSO SEEMED TO HAVE TOO MANY STRETCHED PUNCHES WHICH ENDED UP WITH THERE BEING NO EFFECT TO THEM AS A RESULT.LAY I WOULD SAY YOU HAD THE BETTER OF THE PUNCHES AND YOUR VERSE WAS BETTER PUT TOGETHER BUT NOT THE GREATEST.SORRY KIRK BUT THE FUNNIEST LINE WAS THE KIRK BEING UNDERNEATH(NO HATE).THAT SHIT DID MAKE ME GIGGLE SUM.SO OVERALL I GIVE MY VOTE TO LAY SIMPLY COZ HE HAD A FEW MORE BETTER PUNCHES AND HIS BAD ONES WAS'NT AS BAD AS EL TACO'S.ALSO LAY'S WAS BETTER PUT TOGETHER AND WORDED.BUT NEITHER PIECE AWOKE ME FROM MY NEARLY ASLEEP MIND SET RIGHT NOW.

VOTE-LAY

PEACE

Posted by Cola
fuck this pussy, why even bother with it, we all know i'm better
shit i didn't notice who i was battling, i just read the threads first 4 letters
Blah....this was lame.

when i compete i'm a surething, but your punchlines are just never on the level
cause you have more hopefuls in a row, than Canada's only shot at some medals
Saw were this was goin, n could ahve been a way better punch...but pretty lame.

but dont get me wrong, i love my country, but you... i have my doubts in
i dont care if we have an Army or not... since you've already talked enough about him

This was a dope punch...rofl...

so the predictions, nothing but jokes... i can spit dope whenever i fucking want
see i know i can do better than Lay Fear... i'll throw in a few dozen stomps
this one was blah again..

cause i know for a fact you'll go down fag, so i dont mind what these deadbeats say
the whole fucking league can pre-dick you to win, you'll get some from your boyfriend anyways
Rofl....kinda of a played concept now that everyone is saying it...but funny.

don't deny you're tight with the champ, and as mod, i no longer wonder chief
see the one reason Kirk's stays on top... because Lay prefers it underneath
Rofl....dope punch.

lay knows he's bad with the ladies, no moves and they all scream the sex stinks
so when I blow a few quick lines in a couple minutes... i at least keep it to my texting
hahahha, funny punch.

i stepped over you once man, and twice, well thats no big feat
cause EVERYONE in the league said i can drop hot... so the best to you next week
Ok closer, kinda of a lame thing to say tho....very played.

so i got 3.5 laughs n dope things from your verus.



I disperse the clout, devour this faggot just so its known who hurt him now.
an if he makes me eat my Words.. its cuz I consider him my Verbs an Nouns.
This could have been way better....but the wordin really wasn't harsh enough.

I seen who ya rep in ya sig, an now I'm embarrassed to be in this dispute dude
only thing he proved.. the Establishment doesn have the same depth it USE TO.
rofl...funny.

Taco's chick proved he had a little dick, so I wish you'd just face it you liar.
I know it scares you.. that ya girl would STILL Terrify eased my way inside her.
blah....seemed a lil filler.

save it, an admire..don't try an be Luda cuz you should know this is practice.
Act a fool?'.. you alrleady are stuffed from bein bloated with whackness.
Your punch wasn't connect to your set up @ all...so blah.

after readin all that played shit, seems ya got me down an bein lazy.
if it isn't Flight in rare form..then its prolly the weak Taco we been seein lately.
Filler....n blah punch.

I can see your shakin, maybe your intimidated..but kill you? the hook might
so watch him present tense..showin us all Right Now what scared stiff looks like.
lol, this punch was ok...

just wait till this bitch meets the end of his rope, cuz my rhythmn is sickly.
I usually prep for all my tough matches..so that explains why I didn't this week.
This was a blah punch and generic as fuck. Basically as lame as Flights closer.

I'm glossin ma belts..you'll get walked over cuz now I'll be tossing some welts
walk a day in my shoes..then h'ed have to figure out how to stomp on himself.
lol...ok punch.

i really only got 2 good laughs outta of it.

Really, i didn't think Lay dropped that great. You could tell the first part of Flights verus was all blah n that he really didn't try very hard. But he had a enough to beat Lay.

Vote: Taco

Posted by Lay.
Flight wins 2 - 1

Lay Fear (17) and Flight (13)