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Posted by J-time
The life of the lifeless,can be perceived as both shallow and great
living out of two carrier bags or owning colossal estates.
does this bring happiness? only one man can tell
coz to some happiness is a cardboard box ,bottle of J.daniels
onlookers see the latter as a stinking No mark that might well be dead.
perceive him as a human..hes got 2 arms legs and a head.
he might be happier than you in his gleeful contentmunt.
it is the person looking on with the deepest resentment..
LOOK AT THIS...

Posted by J-time
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Posted by J-time
UPPINN for some fee dudes..

Posted by LPMNDCTE
This was a good little piece. I would of liked to see a bit more from you on this piece just to see how consistent you verse would have been. The 1st two lines drawed me into this piece and had the most potential..

Posted by The Messenger
The life of the lifeless,can be perceived as both shallow and great
living out of two carrier bags or owning colossal estates.

true this life is full of dualities, thsu the confusion

does this bring happiness? only one man can tell
coz to some happiness is a cardboard box ,bottle of J.daniels

happiness or contentment?

onlookers see the latter as a stinking No mark that might well be dead.
perceive him as a human..hes got 2 arms legs and a head.
think you could've developed this concept more

he might be happier than you in his gleeful contentmunt.

i think you spelled that wrong

it is the person looking on with the deepest resentment..
LOOK AT THIS...

nice peace non the less i like the different stance on the topic.