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life poem


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Posted by Tech
spit lyrics cause deverstation with my creation
beat cocks down with rhymes with no hesertation
give people insperation der aint noboy doper
left u without a rope yer, i ant no friggin joker
tired of fuck heads, filling my head up
wot can i say i guess i feel just fed up
with life,, cuz sometimes it dont look right
or shine bright and u feel lost out of sight
give urself another chance, you can make it
if you have negetive thoughts ur gonna do down the drain kid
i went through pain that drove me insane
everyday rained, not in clouds but in my brain

Posted by LPMNDCTE
what up technique. For the most part, this piece was on point. The flow was definitely there. Piece seemed kinda short, but its was descent none the less...